Silhouette in the Sun
Walking on the constellation of motions, defining emotions that prick into one lonely thought. It strikes me with an equilibrium and I could almost remember how it was to once breathe free… but like a drowning man, now I have to keep it in till i reach the next stop. With gravity brushing next to me, I know I don’t need another reason to be on the other side anymore. I guess if you weren’t real, I could always make you up… I guess if I can’t feel you, I’ll just follow you to the shores and make out your silhouette and smile in the burning sunset. Yup, I’m the one in the black shirt disappearing into the darkness because black is the color that swallows up all the light, and I can never get enough of it. Am I blinded or seeing much clearer these days? I can never tell sometimes.
^ ^
hoping to read more..
till then..
cZaSe said this on January 25, 2007 at 6:26 am
another best-seller from you, man! c”,)
ban meruchiru said this on January 25, 2007 at 9:36 am
im drowning too….
Resa said this on January 25, 2007 at 4:37 pm
hi most n
jayson said this on January 25, 2007 at 4:58 pm
hello dr>>>>
joy said this on January 25, 2007 at 5:08 pm
i sense depth in your writings but perhaps you can make it more candid, it’s a little too deep for everyone to understand your point.
joan said this on January 25, 2007 at 5:11 pm
hi
jezamarie said this on January 25, 2007 at 6:01 pm
i have no coments,, im oky for me……
josephine said this on January 25, 2007 at 6:08 pm
hi,,,,,,,,,,,,,
lorena said this on January 25, 2007 at 6:58 pm
why?
Loufel said this on January 25, 2007 at 7:42 pm
Looking forward to more of these……. It makes you think, makes you appreciate things around you,makes you laugh, makes you cry:)
Beth said this on January 25, 2007 at 9:55 pm
helo
sadat said this on January 25, 2007 at 10:12 pm
uhhhmmmm…. aLL i can Say ur soh hands0me… “,& i Like u very well..
Fronica said this on January 25, 2007 at 10:37 pm
my favourite colour is black too. it doesnt matter if our vision is either blinded or filled with clarity. close your eyes. listen to the melodious crashing of the waves. hear your inner voices speak. make a conversation. and the morning sunlight beams down on you.
Cheryl said this on January 25, 2007 at 10:51 pm
yup, sometimes we all are in that situation… he/she is close but seems so far away and unreachable… and all we can do is just be a shadow… but don’t worries my friend, the “one” is still waiting for you… just believe, God Bless^^
Mulyanti said this on January 26, 2007 at 12:06 am
if silhouette is a representation of shadow telling his confusion in something that matters to him, therefore silhouettte and him are just one. pathetic but that’s the way i understand… CRisscross!!!
Alpha said this on January 26, 2007 at 1:31 am
i like the way you write!
Vivienne said this on January 26, 2007 at 3:35 am
well, i admired the way you write… it seems that you are a very deep person. i hope i could read more of your writings and learn from them…
bAbY jAc said this on January 26, 2007 at 5:52 am
Very nice…
Tagpuan said this on January 26, 2007 at 6:13 am
very poetic, very intelligent, way so cool! get it goin man, the’re lots of people waitin for another! great job
ehds said this on January 26, 2007 at 6:20 am
i must have read it 5 times yet i still could not understand what your prose meant. its very lovely yet very unclear.. im confused..
melanie said this on January 26, 2007 at 6:52 am
Beautiful sounding words you pieced together. What do they mean, though? I just don’t get it. Or are we not supposed to?
Aimee said this on January 26, 2007 at 9:12 am
nice..have to read more.
- H a R Y a - said this on January 26, 2007 at 10:10 am
you are handsome in your picture!
very nice message
reggie said this on January 26, 2007 at 4:15 pm
Congratulations!that’s well appreciated! am amaze,,,can you share a little,what are your inspirations in making pieces like these?C;
Elaine grace said this on January 26, 2007 at 5:10 pm
u know what?!!! every single thing in this world is very important…. i know sometimes i ddnt appreciate it, but what most important is GOD is always there for ME to guide me wherever i am!!! sometimes i hate this world where i belong,this damn world who show me the real meaning of life!!! Never give in every single thing that u made!!! i know i will achieve my dreams in perfect time..dont lose hope,dont lose faith!!! put ur TRUST on HIM!!! do ur part and HE will do HIS part… THAT’S THE POWER OF FAITH!!! =)
uhoan ross said this on January 26, 2007 at 5:55 pm
u know what?!!! every single thing in this world is very important…. i know sometimes i ddnt appreciate it, but what most important is GOD is always there for ME to guide me wherever i am!!! sometimes i hate this world where i belong,this damn world who show me the real meaning of life!!! Never give up in every single thing that u made!!! i know i will achieve my dreams in perfect time..dont lose hope,dont lose faith!!! put ur TRUST on HIM!!! do ur part and HE will do HIS part… THAT’S THE POWER OF FAITH!!! =)
Posted by: uhoan ross | January 26, 2007 05:55 PM
uhoan ross said this on January 26, 2007 at 5:57 pm
just be yourself, do the things that makes you happy…
mAe said this on January 26, 2007 at 6:08 pm
nice to be happy
hendri said this on January 26, 2007 at 7:43 pm
uuuuzzzzz….! haneep” la lang^-^
luzviminda said this on January 26, 2007 at 9:40 pm
minggle and stares under the nightmare can make you smile happily than other.
Adelia said this on January 26, 2007 at 9:42 pm
ngapaaaaaaaaaain loch nampang di setuuuuuuuuuuuuu
fielcha said this on January 26, 2007 at 11:19 pm
…lonely, burning,sunset,drowning,darkness and black….oh so sad…you know you can just let that silhouette fade into the darkness because you can’t breath freely again unless you do…your poem suggests some vivid images that i can hardly distinguish…are you confused..? do you keep some poignant mem’ries that you can’t let go…? ironically, you yourself longs to stay in darkness…with the silhouette…<<<.did i get it correctly…?
rhea said this on January 27, 2007 at 12:44 am
panget moh!!!!!!!!!!1
Joy pauleen said this on January 27, 2007 at 1:44 am
u are so deep i wish i could share things with you…
marissa said this on January 27, 2007 at 2:47 am
i am falling with someone i know i can’t be with and impossible to be mine,,help me i think im really drowning!!!!!
marissa said this on January 27, 2007 at 2:51 am
if you need someone to talk to share your feelings, im here willing to listen,hope we’ll be friends
aileen said this on January 27, 2007 at 3:57 am
wow…nice post…but too deep for everybody to understand..hope to read more from you
nevs said this on January 27, 2007 at 4:27 am
very touchy poem. be happy, feel the love of natures and life surrounds you. hope to receive more of your poems.
Sharon said this on January 27, 2007 at 5:13 am
are u a businessman? im just kidding!be happy olweiyz. . .
Rey Mark said this on January 27, 2007 at 5:45 am
I love reading those lines.It seems you are in a melancholic state of your life?.Though you tried to be real but there’s something in you that you find it hard to let go. bitterness, resentment,whatever you call it.Just try to move on and face another day of your life.Maybe i shall say.Don’t settle with things that doesn’t work right.Start anew.If you wanted to be happy,It’s your choice then but if you wanted to be buried from your past,you’re just letting yourself to stay in doom and you not gonna able to see the light of another new day tos tart with.
darielle said this on January 27, 2007 at 6:02 am
you have to know that you are great
Khristi said this on January 27, 2007 at 6:24 am
you have the ability to express what you feel, your words are very striking that it hit me because i was once a prisoner of the past but i released all my resentment, anger, despair through prayers and that i eventually learned from those experiences…with your sanity and good sense of humor i doubt if your still locked up in the dark…godspeed!!!!!!!
ade said this on January 27, 2007 at 7:07 am
reminds me of those hauntingly beautiful sad songs that i love to play on repeat mode
Hui said this on January 27, 2007 at 7:10 am
“Pepol had a habit of luking at me as if I were some kind of mirror instead of a person. They didn’t see me, dey saw der own lewd thoughts, den dey white-masked themselves by calling me da lewd 1.w/o knowing behind me exists a wonderfu creaturel.”
gerby said this on January 27, 2007 at 8:13 am
Be friends? Nice
Fonica said this on January 27, 2007 at 8:57 am
Be friends? Nice
Fonica said this on January 27, 2007 at 8:57 am
i’m drowning too..
**sob….***
but u r really a very good writer.. to be able to express so emotionally of your feelings..
if only i could do it like u..
teddy said this on January 27, 2007 at 9:15 am
1st time that i visited this site..it catchd my intrst,the labyrihth of ur thoughts are amazing, u helpd to undrstnd the emotions of ones lives, helpd to show the lurkings of reality in life..good job,keep it up!!!hope to meet u in person…
gb said this on January 27, 2007 at 7:05 pm
thankful to come across your write-ups again. brighten me up, put me to a state of total trance bring me to another dimension of my emptiness.. you attract me to your gravity of openness that i forget the pains for awhile and be carried away with your strong amplified persona/character making me another person… til then. continue on…
tanith joie said this on January 27, 2007 at 7:50 pm
hi can u be my frend?
jean said this on January 27, 2007 at 8:51 pm
until I see u’re profile I Dont know who u are..?… But If u Want to be my friend, u can send massage to Eva_jabat7@yahoo.com. Ok see u next time..Peacess..
EvHae said this on January 27, 2007 at 9:29 pm
yeah… sometimes its quite depressing but true dat people tend 2 stay behind d silhouette of their genuine selves dan 2 come out of reality dat lyf, at some point of tym, really is cruel… wahuhuhu…(~.~)
silhouette said this on January 27, 2007 at 9:33 pm
i would like to be your friendz…
are-are said this on January 27, 2007 at 9:44 pm
how dare you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
mary grace said this on January 27, 2007 at 10:31 pm
wow!! so sentimental.. -_-
Heartily said this on January 27, 2007 at 10:31 pm
keep your eyes close and breathe as if it is the last breeze of air you’re taking. still confused? sleep and your mind will rest. sometimes, it’s our own selves pulling the gravity of uncertainty. life is so simple my friend! and i never really understands why there are creatures making it more complicated! breathe again! open your eyes now. do you see the light??? smile!
JaY WeLL said this on January 28, 2007 at 1:28 am
you rock..
PUMPKIN said this on January 28, 2007 at 2:04 am
hello cute..
Gerlie said this on January 28, 2007 at 2:21 am
all i know… GOD have a purpose to every one,to every human being,wat ever you do, you fell theres a reason why and GOd only knows coz HE is all knowing GOD…….
we need to trust GOD what ever happen in our lived even you are sad coz of wat happen in your life or happy be thankfull to GOD coz HE has a purpose for you.i think ur sad when you writing ur maseged ryt??????????SMILE=)
chELl said this on January 28, 2007 at 2:28 am
another best seller from you man you nice!!!!!!!!
joan said this on January 28, 2007 at 5:01 am
You truly appreciate the amazing grace of God by wathing the golden rays of shadows as each day wave goodbye telling us another day is over but God is giving us another day to begin with. crezwell@yahoo.com
Violeta said this on January 28, 2007 at 9:33 am
Is it all dark thoughts in the mind of a Saggi?? Always keeping in watever in their heart and never quite finding an outlet for all their restless energy?
amy said this on January 28, 2007 at 9:50 am
nice one! i like the way it is.. exactly right nw wat i fill for, everything seems unclear, shadows makes it blurr to know the real meaning. but if u look deep of it ul know… looking forward for the nxt 1..
bhEL said this on January 28, 2007 at 10:03 am
seems you are drowning in the memory of the past, yet seems you can’t let go that someone and still you are longing for her…knowing that you already have your freedom but you no longer want your freedom in exchange of her presence…am i right???
black is the color of sadness, and a shadow of a broken hearted man…
so sentimental, and it really touch my fragile heart… i remember the hurt i was once knew in my life…seems the bruises is still there in my heart…
dona_gavino
Dona said this on January 28, 2007 at 4:04 pm
wow… thats a nice ok yan pre…..
Maricel said this on January 28, 2007 at 5:10 pm
very touching… hope to read more…
april said this on January 28, 2007 at 5:47 pm
casey txs.u so kind!!!
cewek eiffel said this on January 28, 2007 at 6:00 pm
very descriptive and imaginative…hope to read more
weng said this on January 28, 2007 at 7:28 pm
great!!!!
Roneth said this on January 28, 2007 at 8:47 pm
No comment.. he he..
Iulie said this on January 28, 2007 at 9:12 pm
sangem ya akatok
may hynez said this on January 28, 2007 at 9:45 pm
nice….great idea!!!!just visit me or e mail your comments at the rogermore@yahoo.com!!!!i,m waiting you””or just call me at the 09219893288….ok?
roger said this on January 29, 2007 at 12:02 am
thats a nice piece man .. u r definitely a good writer ..
MonA said this on January 29, 2007 at 12:03 am
this is really nice… keep it up.
N I E L E said this on January 29, 2007 at 1:51 am
ur so good, hope to read more of ur works…
arkim said this on January 29, 2007 at 2:09 am
hi….
can we be friends?
im erica from phil.
erica said this on January 29, 2007 at 4:39 am
im juz curious,r u a japanese?Hey Ki otsu kete ne.You can send mne some message sometimes
jessie said this on January 29, 2007 at 6:03 am
What you wrote, have inspired me about the way I look at life. This is one of the most inspiring things I’ve ever read and for that I thank you.
Chen said this on January 29, 2007 at 6:27 am
if im right, it seems you are delivering 2-3 messages. let me react to the last one. hmmm…why not pursue that something if you really want it that much coz the possibility is that you will end up creating your own world everytime. I’m not a psychologist but I think, its also a sign of weakness and that is not good. we always need to get in touch with being since we are existing. If I get the message right, what you did in sending the message is a good thing. Ei, friends are always around to cheer you up!
michelle said this on January 29, 2007 at 8:25 am
Wow! Never seen such a writing like this on a Friendster blog! Deep, poetic, flows like a river. Keep on writing!
Alfri said this on January 29, 2007 at 3:37 pm
it’s great that you are deep. it makes you look like you have conviction in what you say. If others don’t really get what you say, well let them think that what you write is art.. when it really is art..
it’s refreshing to know that a guy like you still exists! Hope you have great day ahead of you… Experience more, so you can write more… till then.. drown me with your thoughts..
yAnE said this on January 29, 2007 at 3:37 pm
this is nice
wellah said this on January 29, 2007 at 4:06 pm
ah…indecision. *bliss*
BC said this on January 29, 2007 at 4:16 pm
camel toe!
that’s his point. ^_^
JerOmE said this on January 29, 2007 at 4:38 pm
.hello muzta kn hnd ks alam kong ano ssbhn ko syo pero POGI KA YON LANG BYE
karen said this on January 29, 2007 at 6:29 pm
cute
Maricel said this on January 29, 2007 at 6:59 pm
hi!!!!hillow
romerita said this on January 29, 2007 at 7:21 pm
HI!! its me,, l like to be your friends,, so nice!!
meygha said this on January 29, 2007 at 7:24 pm
hi in jen
i like to be ur frnd..
if ok…
jen said this on January 29, 2007 at 8:29 pm
hai….hallo…konichiwa,are you can speack indonesia or japanes????
ArYA said this on January 29, 2007 at 8:42 pm
Hi there!
That was such a very nice thought…write more and i’ll try to read things from you often as long as i have a free time…
GOD bless us all then!
Annaliza said this on January 29, 2007 at 9:32 pm
h! are u d one who invite me? pls leave a messege 2 me tnx
Zam said this on January 29, 2007 at 10:45 pm
Nice one you got there! hoping to read more story
Sherrylen said this on January 29, 2007 at 10:48 pm
hi it’s me rahadian,u can call me deeant.i want to invite u to be my friend.do u want?where do u came from?can u speak indonesia?i come from indonesia.have came to bali?
it’s wonderfull place.
rahadian said this on January 29, 2007 at 11:10 pm
hi
jovan said this on January 29, 2007 at 11:39 pm
another troubled heart yearning for the light? well, its nice. . . what more can i say…
nancy said this on January 30, 2007 at 12:16 am
hey..just happen to browse throu and see ur input..
are u a writer? i could sense the depth ..but y think until so complicated..
y dun u like it in a more simplier way..
Maybe you will be happier..
regards..
Ginny said this on January 30, 2007 at 12:48 am
hi,
i like tha way you write.it seems you are in a doubtful disposition….i just think soo.but it’s really nice.it comes from the heart…
have a nice day!!!!!
ivy said this on January 30, 2007 at 12:58 am
hi!
nice poem huh! hope to read more from you and also i wanted to b ur fren.
god bless!
bernadette said this on January 30, 2007 at 1:46 am
how i wish i could be invisible nad invincible…
then the world wouldn’t mind…
Iel said this on January 30, 2007 at 2:14 am
hello there! your a good writer! hope i could read more inspirational thoughts on you… Godblss.
Lenny said this on January 30, 2007 at 2:26 am
wow… very deep, hard to understand, I guess white is being legal, black colour represent illegal and my personal favorite is… Grey
Nice POEM
Jun W said this on January 30, 2007 at 2:38 am
hey hey.hua huuuuuu.emmmmm.byeeeeeee
bebex said this on January 30, 2007 at 2:58 am
your so cute i think im fallen in love to u
twEEny mAy said this on January 30, 2007 at 3:17 am
Your blog is really nice. hope I can read more of your blogs…could we be friends?
Jom- said this on January 30, 2007 at 4:53 am
hi!!!
want you to be my friend…
Lyren Dimplez said this on January 30, 2007 at 5:20 am
Sometimes, you have to be in the dark to learn to anticipate and appreciate the light. You have to be deaf in order for you to listen more.
yvonne said this on January 30, 2007 at 6:48 am
*waves*
yvonne said this on January 30, 2007 at 6:53 am
hii..
this is zie, can’t give you advice but just wanna say that…nice to have a deep feeling like you had…
zie said this on January 30, 2007 at 7:25 am
Hi,this is d 1st time i read ur blog n im in love with it…im trying 2 improve on my writting as well,hope u can give some tips…
Samantha said this on January 30, 2007 at 9:29 am
i just love what you wrote… you seem nice, i just like people like you… you seem to take life in a very light way…. i would like to read more of your BLOGS, just like you i also love to write but i keep it all for my self & my close friends who insist that i d have a talent for writing those kind of stuff… hope we can be friends……
Sheryll said this on January 30, 2007 at 11:17 am
i just love what you wrote… you seem nice, i just like people like you… you seem to take life in a very light way…. i would like to read more of your BLOGS, just like you i also love to write but i keep it all for my self & my close friends who insist that i d have a talent for writing those kind of stuff… hope we can be friends……
Sheryll said this on January 30, 2007 at 11:20 am
hello hehehehe^._.^ just drop bye…
try lng poh:P bleh!!!
hahahaha
nangulit pa!!!
epal ever talaga akoh!!!
nyahahaha!!!!!
-CuTe said this on January 30, 2007 at 6:45 pm
hi! anyone der….SAIEL is here wants have more friend…c’mon chat now at saisar09 at yahoo.com
saiel said this on January 30, 2007 at 6:54 pm
great to read something like this. i’m not used to reading other write-ups but your’s get me into it. go on and please don’t stop sharing your thoughts. again keep it up!
Marianne said this on January 30, 2007 at 8:28 pm
you have a deep thoughts and i can feel it trough my every senses..i know that you have a great love on writing your own feelings..you express it in a way that you touches someone’s heart..hope to read again more of your artistic writes up..
queenie anne said this on January 30, 2007 at 10:20 pm
i think your graey guy…iwan mahahanap mo din yon..cute ka parin…gud luck in what you’re searching………
Joan Faith said this on January 30, 2007 at 10:59 pm
aWESOME
micah said this on January 30, 2007 at 11:40 pm
wat i can say is…
ur blog is nice…
KELEMICH said this on January 31, 2007 at 2:18 am
add gw dunks
marsella said this on January 31, 2007 at 2:22 am
splendid poetic work of art! such depth!
June said this on January 31, 2007 at 2:47 am
Dude, no offence to you and your legion of fans but it is of my personal opinion that just because you have the (in)ability to juxtapose seemingly-bombastic words eg. Constellation, motion, equilibrium and make abso-f*ckin-lute-ly No sense; makes you neither a good writer nor a deep thinker. But your fans can stand witness against that, as we can see.
It just makes you an incoherent pretentious twat but hey,not that it matters, No? You still have hundreds of idiots worshipping at your “profound altar of wretched emotional revelations”.
Stupid people who can’t speak English RULE!
Fung Kit said this on January 31, 2007 at 2:55 am
Hello
brandon said this on January 31, 2007 at 2:55 am
very subtle, yet the emotion is very strong…
Lee said this on January 31, 2007 at 4:05 am
hi
angel said this on January 31, 2007 at 4:26 am
You know im always looking forward to your blogs, it’s really beautiful & poignant, its mostly sad but it never fails to touch my heart. Keep on writing man…Please ignore the people who have negative comments, they just have to take you as you are right…Way to go man…
karen said this on January 31, 2007 at 4:26 am
hi
can u call me?
09107745521
gerilyn said this on January 31, 2007 at 7:04 pm
very good….i like this_..
tieta said this on January 31, 2007 at 8:40 pm
HI………………
ADE said this on January 31, 2007 at 8:52 pm
hi…………..waz up……………………
marilyn said this on January 31, 2007 at 9:01 pm
nice 2 friends u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
marilyn said this on January 31, 2007 at 9:03 pm
nice writing…. but sad content……
Phia said this on January 31, 2007 at 9:30 pm
i felt somethin’ in it..somethin’ hidden between those words?
rhiza said this on January 31, 2007 at 10:47 pm
have you read all your comments? whoah,,, it’s quite a lot,,, i was fascinated with how you write,,,i love to write too! hope i can learn from you,,,i actually was mesmerized with your work and wondered if what you wrote was for real,,
mail me have time!
God Bless.
vidavidz said this on February 1, 2007 at 12:31 am
hi
Jocielyn said this on February 1, 2007 at 1:28 am
uhmmm…casey right???uhm..i really like the way you write..
Jonnah said this on February 1, 2007 at 2:52 am
i feel you man! (whatever) very cool…
Tez said this on February 1, 2007 at 3:26 am
you cute
Kha said this on February 1, 2007 at 8:33 am
hi cassey..
you are one heck of a writer.. hmm..
there arent many people who’s that good..
you are inspiring and refeshing..
hannie said this on February 1, 2007 at 11:53 am
hello
i dont know who u?
i just want to say ur not cute but u have a sex appeal!!hahaha
always take care
gen said this on February 1, 2007 at 12:06 pm
hI there…
hmmm…your words are very deep…it’s like i can feel what you feel when you wrote that…hope there’s still more…
M-a-R-c-Y said this on February 1, 2007 at 2:34 pm
that was nice, man…ur into the realization of what life really is..just don’t be confused in the irony of truth.hold on to ur faith and pray more for GOD’s guidance because HE knows everything.consider yourself lucky for having a chance to see the world and experience living on earth.the knowledge a person has is nothing compared to GOD’s and that in many ways, man tend to question the nature of things and even contest the power of Heaven just to prove themselves right..if you’re still down,please pray, meditate in the presence of the Holy Spirit..moreso,read the Holy Bible.you can find the best answers in that book.
I wish you all the best in your journey. May you find what you’re looking for,dear.
GOD bless us all then always!
Edelyn Joy said this on February 1, 2007 at 5:10 pm
nooooooooooo….commmmmmmmmment
Herson said this on February 1, 2007 at 5:13 pm
“HL FKZC VD LDS” MHBD QDZCHMF…
Brainy right? Decode the message….
Lorydel said this on February 1, 2007 at 6:04 pm
jalil
Jalil said this on February 1, 2007 at 7:22 pm
hi guys…just 2 make ur friend
ipni said this on February 1, 2007 at 7:27 pm
Wow!
Very nice! 
Cheska said this on February 1, 2007 at 8:14 pm
keep sharing ur thoughts!
-Simple said this on February 1, 2007 at 8:24 pm
Hi everybody, sorry i was not able to send any message becausa i am not always on line.
JASMINE said this on February 1, 2007 at 8:55 pm
h!!…
james said this on February 1, 2007 at 9:01 pm
hi la lang add nyo aq
luzviminda said this on February 1, 2007 at 9:19 pm
To whoever that prose was meant for, what a lucky being to have caused a very lovely work!
Tessa Marie said this on February 1, 2007 at 10:08 pm
The lengths some people will go to when they’re horny.
ChIng Shun said this on February 1, 2007 at 10:47 pm
hi!!!add me up…nice picture. . .
marygold said this on February 2, 2007 at 12:48 am
Wow from the last time I’ve read this entry in your blog there were just a few comments, but now a lot of people have given their views about what you write. Do you get to read all our comments? Anyway, I read positive and some negative comments, but what the heck, they are still interested that they continue to read your work. For me it may be your past experiences or how you see life that you translate it with weaving words. I don’t blame you but, I do believe you are not a shallow person nor someone who is showing off, but rather a person who wants to express his emotions and wants to share his life and learn from people who gets to read his work. Continue to write, people’s reaction would depend on how they readers understand it. But what is important is that you are happy with what you do. Godbless
Beth said this on February 2, 2007 at 1:49 am
> hai^^
> no comment 4 u
> but…
> i hope u add me 2
Halita said this on February 2, 2007 at 4:25 am
hi no comment speachless
mylene said this on February 2, 2007 at 4:56 am
when i read your blogs, i felt mesmerized, im wanting more! hehehehe, think i can’t just get enough! keep it up!
marc said this on February 2, 2007 at 8:52 am
its great!!! keep it up
menchel said this on February 2, 2007 at 1:05 pm
I can sense ur a sensitive person but I want to know u personally. I dont have friends outside the country maybe ur the first one i would be happier if u consider me as one of ur friends here in the Philippines.
farahfaucet said this on February 2, 2007 at 5:26 pm
hi..im chelle,also an aspiring writer..
this is my first time to read blogs and yours was the first one i read..i like ur writing style,the readers are encouraged to read between the lines..i always admire people who can write well..
please add me up.. sweetbluepisces@yahoo.com
im looking forward to hearing from you one of these days..
ChELLe said this on February 2, 2007 at 7:11 pm
Wow! Shakespear’s new age piece??? Impressive and yet…preferably things are straight to the point!
Aileen said this on February 2, 2007 at 11:32 pm
hi your so handsome by d way im joanna michaella
JM said this on February 3, 2007 at 12:24 am
ellOW>>>>>>>> frend can u beeee>>>>>>>mAy frend
mane said this on February 3, 2007 at 12:33 am
nice artwork ;p
bebang said this on February 3, 2007 at 1:40 am
elow nice to meet you.
Maristella said this on February 3, 2007 at 2:49 am
hi, i chance upon ur blog… good choice of words and it touch me… hope to read more of ur works… =)
' Michelle ' said this on February 3, 2007 at 4:48 am
another sunset…another sun rise..another chapter of life…another muse..keeps on penning ur thought in your own beatiful prose…i enjoy reading it… peace.
Jenn said this on February 3, 2007 at 5:14 am
hello… your such a man of great thoghts.. appreciated .. mag iisip talaga ang reader on what you mean with your writings.. well keep it up bro..
argie said this on February 3, 2007 at 5:34 am
” Those words are beautiful…really “
sharon said this on February 3, 2007 at 6:05 am
deep and true =)
Forgiven BaBe said this on February 3, 2007 at 6:22 am
With all due respect, all these kudos are driving me utterly batshit. To all that think this is a good piece: I defy you to tell me what he’s talking about. Go on. Explain, please. Inscrutability does not a good writing make.
I’ve got a feeling that all those sesquipedialians are just meant to put an illusion of depth - there’s actually ZERO substance to all those hodgepodge. Just because he can put all those grandiloquent words - like constellation and emotion - on a paragraph doesn’t automatically follow that this article is “compelling read”.
ChIng Shun said this on February 3, 2007 at 8:02 am
Well, Its a nice write-up! Sadness,loneliness and whatever ,its just a flowery of our life with out those feelings life is useless no challenge at all. For me thats make my life beautiful… And we should not forget our weaknesses because somehow these can improve us in our succeeding endeavors.Its only a matter of learning from mistakes, a matter of strengthening your abilities.
Czarina said this on February 3, 2007 at 8:27 am
huh?ok its nice but kinnda weird sorry.
alya said this on February 3, 2007 at 5:45 pm
it isn’t about love ryt? i guess what ure trying to say is that people are consumed by all this events like parties, school, and non-stop interaction with others and what makes them go deeper into that “motion” is they are afraid to stop and to think of the moment bec. that will makes them lonely and to think of the world at a different perpective will make u feel like ure on the “other-side” or deviating from all this. You are so caught-up that getting away from it is an impossible task. It felt like we wear the same shirt but ure’s is a black one which make u still diff. from everyone and that gravity pulling u is none-the less the idealism in you who discreetly screaming out so loud that only u can hear. and what mkes u feel sad about that u can’t change things and yet to think of changing is easy. If idealsm wasn’t real to this so-called reality then we can still make it real in our reveries and perhaps just dream of it.
gERi said this on February 3, 2007 at 6:45 pm
it’s so nice and cute!!
beverlyn said this on February 3, 2007 at 7:34 pm
are u romantically disfranchized dellusional or merely hopeful? or just gay?… too deep… just be true… hope to read more from you… God bless…
fritzie said this on February 3, 2007 at 8:00 pm
it so nyc….
shetzie said this on February 3, 2007 at 9:16 pm
ur so cute..
cadji said this on February 4, 2007 at 3:53 am
poetic! it dwells! it dwells!
shellerey said this on February 4, 2007 at 5:18 am
hi…..
bamz said this on February 4, 2007 at 5:31 am
hi…..
bamz said this on February 4, 2007 at 5:31 am
ur eyes so cute!!!!!!!!
bamz said this on February 4, 2007 at 5:33 am
I can feel it..It’s so unreachable..awaiting for your next blog..
Hui Xian said this on February 4, 2007 at 5:43 am
i think it’s okey you,,,,,,,your so cute can you be my freind?
lyssa said this on February 4, 2007 at 9:08 am
hai?????
paul said this on February 4, 2007 at 9:12 am
were all slaves of our nature thats the way we’ll be.. the world our own but still were all the same..
Glenn said this on February 4, 2007 at 9:19 am
a second thought man, and dont really knew if theres a law that provides, cause i guess it isnt right, to hide, assuring no one will surely see by wearing black in the dark ’smart pervert’. BAWAL MANG BOSO!!
Glenn said this on February 4, 2007 at 9:37 am
i like u say……
i love u say……
cal or sent sms to me
in 08179443245 or +628179443245…..
thank’s
dhanu said this on February 4, 2007 at 7:22 pm
hi”
jenNy said this on February 4, 2007 at 7:30 pm
nice blogs… hope to read more.
John Carlo said this on February 4, 2007 at 8:52 pm
hi..your work is nice i hope we can be friends…i hope so…tell next time
Rochelle said this on February 4, 2007 at 9:25 pm
your sad haayyy…….wawa amn…
catherine said this on February 5, 2007 at 1:02 am
a very nice blog you have…!
nice work!!! i can say that you expressing your self through it and it reflect a lot to your personality from within………….
Marvin said this on February 5, 2007 at 1:45 am
nothing!!!!!!
katie said this on February 5, 2007 at 2:35 am
nice to read but hard to understand.. full of metaphoric words
too deep that i cant hardly relate on what you are trying to express..
but nice one man..
CaSey Ni AnGaS said this on February 5, 2007 at 6:39 am
This is great.. you’re awesome..
do me said this on February 5, 2007 at 7:34 am
it is sad …..
Yenoh said this on February 5, 2007 at 5:21 pm
i like it, ur so handsome
Jupiter said this on February 5, 2007 at 7:35 pm
hi???
wana be my friend?
my e-mail add is:
donated_nphs15@yahoo.com
add me as your friend plszszs
harris said this on February 5, 2007 at 9:01 pm
fantasy?…. illusion?….
cant get enough of it huh?….
same here…
raine said this on February 5, 2007 at 9:47 pm
hmmm..itz hard to figure out your profound words..unfathomable indeed are your thoughts but your piece is excellent,amazing & I love reading it..Confusing maybe but SADNESS is what I think you are emphasizing here..true? Loneliness out of longing for someone beyond your reach..or someone who exists only in your mind & seen only by your own sight.
Riza Del said this on February 6, 2007 at 1:21 am
hi! i wanna be one of your friends…pls. add me to your friends list…
here’s my e-mail add:
phol1089@yahoo.com
thank you and God Bless…!!!
aiai said this on February 6, 2007 at 3:02 am
hi!!! how are you or everybody? who know me? ok me fyn!!! i’m new account my friendster! thank you so much! love…chartlon
charlton said this on February 6, 2007 at 5:59 am
“…xxx…I’m the one in the black shirt disappearing into the darkness because black is the color that swallows up all the light, and I can never get enough of it. Am I blinded or seeing much clearer these days? I can never tell sometimes….xxx…”—i can relate with these lines…
carlos II said this on February 6, 2007 at 7:28 am
I’m impressed! You just got something that caught my attention. Keep posting catchy thoughts.
vangie said this on February 6, 2007 at 9:56 am
you’RE great!!!…absoluteLY!!! perfect!!!i love your writings!! more poweR!!
Anali said this on February 6, 2007 at 10:20 am
wew! nice one, keep it up!
laudimer said this on February 6, 2007 at 8:14 pm
hai……..leh knal kmu???
nashcha said this on February 6, 2007 at 9:54 pm
wow! you make me proud of you boy
keep it up
please make a poem just for me
MARNIE said this on February 6, 2007 at 10:29 pm
hai casey…
nice blogs..
i like to read more about ur next blogs…
good luck for ur job than…
Aida said this on February 6, 2007 at 10:47 pm
such anice 1!!!!!!
Irene said this on February 6, 2007 at 10:54 pm
hi poh!
kamille ann said this on February 6, 2007 at 11:07 pm
such flair with words. u charm by words.
Amreeta said this on February 7, 2007 at 1:12 am
i just read your silloute this day, and i can say that i really loved it! and can i asked? who is your inspiration for that such wonderful poem? hope you can answer me………… and am waiting for that and expecting okey?
tantarendo said this on February 7, 2007 at 2:30 am
nxt time na lng!!!!! log out na q yeh…..soon you’ll know if what is on my mind……
mie said this on February 7, 2007 at 2:35 am
as long as we search for our identity, we just imagine ourself as a silhouette.
van said this on February 7, 2007 at 2:53 am
Read the blog once without any interruption… then you will understand the message it convey!!
that’s the “power of thinking without thinking”
gERi said this on February 7, 2007 at 3:03 am
h! you look good! hehehehe
just kidding… ya, your handsome….hope to see you soon hehehehe joke only.
tweetyrhol said this on February 7, 2007 at 3:28 am
its cute
say said this on February 7, 2007 at 4:16 am
are you a writer?, if u are, then its a good thing.
therese carmel said this on February 7, 2007 at 4:16 am
Hey… wazup..??… txt me naman plz… fowh… diz is my # 09192052536. tnx.. i’ll w8 4 ur txt… alwys tke cre of urself hah… mmmwwuaahh….
Cherry Lyn said this on February 7, 2007 at 5:56 am
so deep.. =) nice
DIVA said this on February 7, 2007 at 6:49 am
Thanks for sharing this.
alex said this on February 7, 2007 at 5:08 pm
dude .. u re good … i juz cannot say thing to express it ..
arlin said this on February 7, 2007 at 7:13 pm
wonderful!!!!i like the way you write simple and i don’t know what to say, it’s really good. I hope black doesn’t swallow u, so i can see ur charming face longer
ika said this on February 7, 2007 at 9:35 pm
Wow! its very touching…i almost cry. hope to read more of it…
cHiNiTa said this on February 7, 2007 at 10:44 pm
IM MIRA.. WELL I WNT U 2 BE MY FREND.
christian said this on February 7, 2007 at 11:37 pm
Cute na chini sana we meet! writin is really a fulfillment. Sana I could do what you are doin here. I am amazed sa country napuntahan mo. I admit i’m lookin to your pictures not only to you but to the place you’ve been. Sarap! Sana makapunta din ako.
Anatasia said this on February 7, 2007 at 11:42 pm
hi can we be friend?im dipi from philiphines…
ianne said this on February 8, 2007 at 12:34 am
ahahhahaha….
-T I N - T I N- said this on February 8, 2007 at 3:16 am
i never encountered a friendster blog entry this profound..somehow it struck as a lil “philosophical”..:)..nevertheless,its cool..hope i could read more..:)
haLLaCe said this on February 8, 2007 at 4:21 am
hi.. I really love reading your blog. I hope you will invite me…
thonee said this on February 8, 2007 at 5:13 am
we always have a choice, we always know what’s wrong and what’s right. what’s good and what’s evil. in times both evil exists in your option, remember to choose d lesser one.. important thing is that you should know when you should be happy and when you should let somebody happy too.
Cheriel said this on February 8, 2007 at 5:22 am
all i can say is… ” it Was very very nice, inspiring and breathe taking poetry…” keep-up the good work… Go on and share your GOD given talent… GoDspeed.. and GOD bless…2
alvin said this on February 8, 2007 at 8:11 am
you gave inspirations for those people who where in the middle of drowning!!its nice to express what you really feel deeply.
cathy said this on February 8, 2007 at 8:26 am
ur so…cute,i lyk u
yurie said this on February 8, 2007 at 9:28 am
ang pangit nyo po talaga promis
glaiza said this on February 8, 2007 at 3:35 pm
Never push yourself to the limits, humans do have limitations! Remember that even metals get tired! So rest if u must but never surrender…..
Kissy said this on February 8, 2007 at 5:39 pm
your poem is so nice. wish I could compose the way you can..=)
Roshy said this on February 9, 2007 at 5:26 am
wot a beautiful picture…
Sarie said this on February 9, 2007 at 6:23 am
I just wanna say that I enjoyed reading your blogposts… hehe keep it up!
JAY said this on February 10, 2007 at 3:24 am
man.. just look at what you did..your blogs are the most commented one.. i love it..
Mark Leonard said this on February 10, 2007 at 6:38 am
it’s very beatifully man!!!!!
what this picture your have???
aan said this on February 10, 2007 at 10:36 pm
helooooooooooo
ang ganda ko talaga!!!!!!!!!!!!!
may ann said this on February 11, 2007 at 2:50 am
helooooooooooo
ang ganda ko talaga!!!!!!!!!!!!!
may ann said this on February 11, 2007 at 2:50 am
my friends said u look like a guy in “tension” team.
Weissella said this on February 11, 2007 at 11:14 pm
mixed feelings of wanting freedom and yet chains tie him … remembering how it was to once be free and be able to really live and breathe. no questions, no answering to anyone but yourself. now it’s all different.
he feels her but keeps his feelings hidden in an cave of emotions… he gives himself the chance to want her (another)… thinking.. is she real? is she not?… he’ll make her real if she’s not.. in his mind .. she will be a silhouette (a shadow), someone with the smile.. i’d say that the burning sunset is the burning desire… so yearning and dying… he decides if he’ll finally wake… and finds himself denying and accepting… half-thinking, deciding… decidin… decidi.. decid.. until all of the emotions spill and the overflow levels the overwhelming feeling of want… until it’s none… it’s pitch black .. and dark.. nowhere… nowhere…
Cher said this on February 12, 2007 at 6:47 am
As a regular reader, I’d like to just say how much I adore your writings. Such Eloquence in your writings, yet the content is real, as well as the emotions. It’s great that we have authors like you who express your feelings creatively, yet sometimes I find myself here stopping, twisting my perspective to see what you truly are trying to say. Nontheless, great job on the blog, and I hope youy keep updating your blog.
Cj said this on February 12, 2007 at 4:49 pm
what a rough days u have,
even if the sun set, u will never get back to the ground,
only if u c the light,
which will make u brighter than the sun..
SITI ZURIANI said this on February 12, 2007 at 6:43 pm
such an amazing post… a sort of shakesperian poem! but however u must have a certain reason for comparing urself into that black man…
Cheng said this on February 12, 2007 at 10:21 pm
wow..thanks for creating such writings..it’s almost unreal! hehe..ciao!
clarizza said this on February 13, 2007 at 3:20 am
your remind me of my brother Niño who like you has a gift of words and a gift of articulation…keep writing. Cheers!!!
Ching said this on February 13, 2007 at 8:05 pm
Praise God!
siegfrid said this on February 13, 2007 at 8:54 pm
very nice… it captures the artist saddness.
“why is it that artist do best describe their emotions in writtings?”
Erleen said this on February 14, 2007 at 4:04 am
hi;scott hows ur day.
anthony said this on February 14, 2007 at 5:45 am
how nice….ur great…i dont understand ur blogs….but how cute ur picture
GAIL said this on February 14, 2007 at 8:21 pm
Post to my picture
Terence said this on February 14, 2007 at 11:35 pm
Hai…guys,I looking to get Friends plz to send me Massage.I wait….tHaNxS
ardin said this on February 15, 2007 at 7:18 pm
what you’ve written perfectly described the kind of sadness buried deep down my mind.
sensible.
Joy said this on February 16, 2007 at 7:57 am
there is so much in life than following the silhouette of sunlight. Hope is there. You shouldnt give up. Love is there.Your creativity makes u more lovable and serenly beautiful. i love it.
b l i s s said this on February 18, 2007 at 4:56 am
I keep my friends as misers do their treasure, because, of all the things granted us by wisdom, none is greater or better than friendship.
PajOjoT said this on February 19, 2007 at 11:10 pm
moving.
you’re a gifted storyteller.
you know how to maximize your virtu in order to create a fortuna that suits you best.
kath said this on February 21, 2007 at 1:14 am
i think im crazy specially when im inlove!!!!oh my!!!can u be my adviser?mhaez_17@yahoo.com
Ester said this on February 21, 2007 at 8:27 pm
wow that was great..
you have the art of motivating people..
townie said this on February 22, 2007 at 9:46 pm
…..imaginative, creative, artistic…i like it:)
success 4 u…
Tanny said this on February 23, 2007 at 12:03 am
hello!anyone want to invite me?
jet said this on February 23, 2007 at 4:01 am
you know what? i like reading your blog…please invite me as one of your friend… i’m joan../
joan said this on February 23, 2007 at 6:05 am
know what i like reading your blog…
are you a serious guy?
your creative person…
would you invite me as one of your friend..
razel said this on February 23, 2007 at 7:34 pm
ok
ehsan said this on February 23, 2007 at 8:02 pm
ur so very talented, andur so cute also!
Mm said this on February 24, 2007 at 3:32 am
UR SO..cute tlaga specially d way u look..ur so smart looking guy..kip it up!!god bless
angel said this on February 25, 2007 at 12:22 pm
wow!! u have a great mark on most command… ckckck…
great..plok plok plok(hands claps);)
but what is silhouette mean? i dont get it ..>.<”
keep writing!
Alliza said this on February 25, 2007 at 6:38 pm
so cool
Jimmy said this on March 2, 2007 at 6:43 pm
lufet!
mhatet said this on March 14, 2007 at 6:07 am
this blog srly2 great!!!! kip it up
xeEnee said this on November 23, 2007 at 7:22 am
This post speaks of being enthralled by someone unattainable and the desire to remain intoxicated. Another beautiful piece… =)
Dee said this on March 3, 2008 at 9:15 am
youve got a lot of fans….add me…hehehe whew…what is this madness all about…you unveil the sweetness thoughts inside of a certain individual and unlocking every possible facade of this life in ones door to be poured once and for all a reflection of truth and honesty. It was just like a wine frizzled on your mouth and it keeps you hunting all the thoughts that subside…you!!!!you!!!!you!!!!why are you such a writer that connects ones past, present and future…hehehe
Metapsyche said this on April 16, 2008 at 11:48 pm