Silent Farewell
There is silent spark that fades into the dark, overwhelmed by a blinding and blazing sun; A sun that was eclipsed by the burdens of a restless wanderlust that could go supernova at a moments notice. Troubling times bring troubling news, and more muddling with the light hearted affairs… a world that some of us may only view through a shatterproof glass. Now all is quiet and night ensued as I turn a blind eye on a brightly fading spark. Farewell to all woes, for woe is me and am also a fool.
hidadareuluckygrl
aida said this on February 26, 2007 at 12:23 am
Oh well, what can i say?!
I assume that you refer to yourself as that “silent spark” amidst the blazing sun, The Sun which i assume to be the mixed feelings going inside you, troubling you for not knowing what is “it” that you long,or what is it that makes you think and feel awkward amidst the people who seemed to be so normal.(if you recognize that you know that you don’t know, and there are a lot of things that you don’t understand and troubled by it, i must say that you’re the most normal person i’ve known)
questions,questions,questions,
that could go so clear and loud in those selected moments when you chooses not to think of it and yet inescapably entrenched within your system.
Thinking and feeling miserable bring miserable, or thinking and feeling dumb brings emptiness, Perceiving within your reasons brings this Big riddle. A riddle that is untouchable by the world of senses that only some people could actually take-in and dive.
Don’t answer your Question by diving,in to the “habits”, blinding your troubled mind by the normality of things coz it will just confuse you.
If you give up asking then may i ask if you now choose to join the ranks of the apathetic and the indifferent?
gERi said this on February 26, 2007 at 12:40 am
good to hear that.
tc
Brian said this on February 26, 2007 at 5:03 am
im glad to having a friendster
mae said this on February 26, 2007 at 4:37 pm
hii its good i think
Nicole said this on February 26, 2007 at 5:41 pm
great as usual…
Pamela said this on February 26, 2007 at 8:15 pm
how empty should one be,
so lone, silence summoned;
to weave one’s thoughts beautifully
into a sea of melancholic words?
Candy said this on February 26, 2007 at 8:38 pm
I really love each and every word there. So poetics.Seems so melancholic yet inspiring. Nice, bebe.
NOOR said this on February 26, 2007 at 11:03 pm
no i dont have a comment
Remwil said this on February 27, 2007 at 5:24 am
Moving on…….. to life. That is good!
Beth said this on February 27, 2007 at 4:43 pm
ar u indonesian?
muhamad said this on February 28, 2007 at 8:03 am
none i’m just curious what thats farewell for?
benna mae said this on February 28, 2007 at 8:50 pm
hey ya all guys out there..whatzz up? my comments? i dont have any comments at the moment.. regards to everybody out there..
jjean said this on February 28, 2007 at 9:00 pm
thank you all. see yah!!!
john denver said this on February 28, 2007 at 10:01 pm
elow der
grace said this on February 28, 2007 at 11:05 pm
YOU ARE SO COOL.
Richmond said this on March 2, 2007 at 1:03 am
hi sir,
can you aadd me i’m too curious to you… haave a pleasent daay..good day.. thank’s
jhaz said this on March 2, 2007 at 6:13 am
hi..cool articles, i like it although i dn quite understand it..it shows how powerful the writing skills u have..keep it up!!
-Northlife- said this on March 2, 2007 at 10:10 am
jeffrey said this on March 2, 2007 at 6:32 pm
It’s sounds something…i don’t know what??if want u can share with me…
SITI AMINAH said this on March 3, 2007 at 3:25 am
its sad …
yoly said this on March 3, 2007 at 5:06 am
nice
lester said this on March 4, 2007 at 6:46 pm
where did the emotion came from?….its so deep…
beigh said this on March 5, 2007 at 2:50 am
its fine………..
elaine said this on March 5, 2007 at 6:48 am
nice
khee said this on March 5, 2007 at 10:15 am
Don’t think too much cuz sometimes our mind are just the one that makes things complicated. Live normally and enjoy life. Be yourself….
Merline said this on March 5, 2007 at 2:01 pm
Hehehe… I have not read what you posted well.
Merline said this on March 5, 2007 at 2:10 pm
How come you dont answer the comments?
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Richmond said this on March 5, 2007 at 8:45 pm
hey…this is great…hope to know you better…even i don’t understand much (i think,) i just felt something on what you’ve said…it feels a little peculiar of me talking to somebody i don’t know…maybe you brought the interest out of me to have the guts to mail you…hope that i can be your friend….thanks…hope that you’ll respond when you have read my message…thanks…
khat-khat said this on March 5, 2007 at 10:32 pm
what can i say????????thats life!!just be strong…
maxima said this on March 6, 2007 at 7:02 pm
no comment………..hehehehe…….
trecya said this on March 6, 2007 at 11:04 pm
all i can say,,,i believe that all of us suffer like that,,so we must brave,,,,for the future………..
shane said this on March 7, 2007 at 3:07 am
what can i say?!…sa drugs lagi kang talo pg my responde panalo!!!
gud na gud..lasang buko..
emily said this on March 7, 2007 at 5:37 am
how come you get so much comments???
envy you man.. ^^
peace..
oridus said this on March 7, 2007 at 7:40 am
light is a scary things after all. no matter how desperately you seek for the sun, u just go blind when you saw the light.yet, deep in our heart, we still craving for it. however the blindness you bear within after that, - it’s a santuary-like. you neednt fear the light no more. as it is…a goodbye. is it a good thing that at least darkness didnt leave you alone to bleed? it swallowed you so u neednt feel anyhing ever again.
astria said this on March 7, 2007 at 5:04 pm
hey
deAthbAtGuRl said this on March 7, 2007 at 5:18 pm
really deep..so where are u from…. i’m from malayisa
sarah said this on March 7, 2007 at 6:10 pm
Thats very great of you to impress me..Do you have a book of your own preferences to share??I will love to read that,you know?.Someone as deep as you has more things to offer.Hoindi ka mapapahiya..Hey,you already a writer..Iba talaga pag experience na ang nagsalita>gud luck>>post more..,kuya..
ma rejean said this on March 7, 2007 at 6:41 pm
pangit kaayo
RAVE said this on March 7, 2007 at 9:33 pm
haiii
wahyyu said this on March 8, 2007 at 5:29 am
oh, heavy heart…
Rhoda said this on March 8, 2007 at 5:08 pm
after i read ur short messages up there, i donno wat can i comment. its sad.. sound like a lonely sole flying in the earth searching a place to stop the step..
susan said this on March 9, 2007 at 12:26 am
hi
i want u 2 be my friend…..i hope nxt time my reply kw sa comment k
joy said this on March 9, 2007 at 1:56 am
its kind a deep… so hard to understand.. but did you really write it?? well, doest it all mean about supernatural or higher power, something like that?? but still, its kindda cool.. maybe it really reflects to what you really are.. right??
ester said this on March 9, 2007 at 4:22 am
hi there!
i saw sadness, compassion in your words. well, i like the way you deliver it. it’s superb! keep it up. i hope i can more of ur blogs soon.
Simply Red said this on March 9, 2007 at 10:45 am
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Abegael said this on March 9, 2007 at 11:25 pm
6:58 do you know where my spark is…here, here, here….
Gerald said this on March 10, 2007 at 6:30 am
yeah…life is so complicated, but we should keep our head up though
dedi said this on March 10, 2007 at 7:04 am
nice 1 its one of the best
aldrine said this on March 10, 2007 at 9:39 am
life is life..
lean said this on March 10, 2007 at 6:26 pm
from wat i see in here, u seem so indulged in ur sorrows and sufferrings, sumtimes you juz need to look at the bright side of life, the more u immerged urself in the sea of darkness, the more happiness seems to close it’s door unto u…
renee caryn said this on March 10, 2007 at 11:52 pm
yeah, she leaves, thats her statement. ive dreamt of that; saw the empty sadness again.. i mean her and now uve said it. i think its my esp, but dont you worry im not schizo or a drug fiend addict.. well, till then still shes breathing in her wanderlust!
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Raul said this on March 11, 2007 at 1:55 am
ur so cute
quennie ena said this on March 11, 2007 at 4:56 am
what a terrific poem?! i love evry words you’ve used..but it seems so sad.. r u torned? HEY! get up! make each day worthy!
Michelle said this on March 11, 2007 at 5:25 am
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melvereen said this on March 11, 2007 at 6:54 am
ang gnda q nman!!!!
memz said this on March 12, 2007 at 3:46 am
Intricate for anyone who does not know how to read between the lines…a maze, a puzzle that distorts ones mind who reads it…your writings is so creative that depicts your emotions and mind wherein you who can only grasp . MYSTERIOUS! Behind each and every word lies a secret…
FiReHAuS said this on March 12, 2007 at 8:16 am
A deep contemplation I’ve made, that reflects my self as a blind person. But since you’re just expressing something you felt inside, I can say that while we’re still alive, farewell serves for a brighter hope of a sweet hello, in the same way that a twilight must there to have a daybreak.
Tom said this on March 12, 2007 at 9:13 am
bwahahaha………stay calm on fire
miaka said this on March 12, 2007 at 6:55 pm
boom tarat tarat
arianne said this on March 12, 2007 at 10:54 pm
esmawan wan
esmawan said this on March 14, 2007 at 3:58 am
la lng
miggy said this on March 16, 2007 at 3:39 am
hi !!!tnx 4 dat wonderful poem
Stephy said this on March 22, 2007 at 12:47 am
wow, you wrote profoundly..there is so much feelings of that, i should say..
i like it..
arianne said this on March 30, 2007 at 2:31 am
ewan kilala ko ba sila??hehehe jok lang po!!
loraine said this on April 8, 2007 at 4:30 am
ewan kilala ko ba sila??hehehe jok lang po!!
loraine said this on April 8, 2007 at 4:30 am
nc blog. . .
-Jun- said this on April 14, 2007 at 8:04 am
Hi!
Nice Poem! Can you add me? I love to read all your articles!!!=)
Dian said this on April 16, 2007 at 5:25 am
i accidentally saw your posts and it intersts me a lot!! I like you flaw for writing such posts…
Giann said this on April 30, 2007 at 9:38 pm
i was curiouss thats why I drop bye your page and if you don’t mind adding me on your friends list would be of my pleasure. God bless and take care…
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glenn said this on October 12, 2007 at 7:14 pm
after reading all your articles… I can’t help myself but fall in love with you…
Sharon said this on December 1, 2007 at 7:14 pm
nice blog..:) so simple, yet it struck me deep..
Katherine said this on December 18, 2007 at 4:16 am
To relate to the poem, one has to share the same experience. Saying farewell to a beloved soul. Beautifully delivered, you write from the heart.
Julio said this on January 22, 2008 at 3:19 am
We are all fools one time or another…
Dee said this on March 3, 2008 at 8:36 am
i have read your blog…you have great skills in writing … words are heavy… people would barely understand it… i am very inspired by you… i am just learning in writing poems.. but i think i lack of knowledge in words… i think its because i dont read books that much… any advice you could possibly give me???…
theres so much in me that really needs to be expressed…
hMmMm.. someday.. i would be like you… a word literate…^__^
and can you add me up?…
felichi_marie_benz@yahoo.com
thanks a lot…!
i would be grateful if you answer back.:)
F e L e T s I said this on March 22, 2008 at 7:40 am
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mhenmhen said this on March 29, 2008 at 9:44 pm
…it touched my heart…
MARY ANN said this on April 2, 2008 at 9:59 pm
you inspires me, and you wake up my deep aspirations since when i’ve learned to express myself fully when im 18. i need to go back writing which i know define s me as i am so as you. im glad and grateful reading your blogs it dwells it dwells it dwells!!!!!hehehehe. i have already read all your blogs…
Metapsyche said this on April 16, 2008 at 11:54 pm
it’s good..
aa KlixCairo said this on May 6, 2008 at 9:59 pm
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well….welll i really appreciate every single word u mean.i’m amazed it.
ethel said this on June 9, 2008 at 12:16 am
i felt a pain in my heart. i’m really hurting right now, but i got the comfort i needed after reading your post… thanks
diane said this on July 2, 2008 at 11:23 am